Sailing

 Sailing ... a metaphor for Life


 
Loose watercolor and original poem by Kieran Gonsalves (c) 2025


I find myself returning to sailing ... there's something very stark
Each outing is as unpredictable as life itself, on which we all embark

Navigating through the day, you suddenly trim the sail to go full speed
And just as quickly you starting luffing up, proceeding slowly if you need

You can't master sailing or life, reading books. You have to experience it
Life too requires us to cast out into deep waters, takes courage and grit

Being open to learning from your mistakes can make all the difference
Between learning the ropes to success or drowning in your ignorance

Comments

Anonymous said…
There is a beautiful song titled “Am Sailing” by Rod Stewart. https://youtu.be/iQzB5T_B_iI
Your watercolor reminded me of that and I promptly heard it a couple of times….. :-) (WhatsApp comment on a alumnus group)
Kieran said…
This number was on my playlist at XLRI. Deceptively simple tune but quite mellow. Loved this performance of Rod Stewart Live at Royal Albert Hall. The whole concert was epic - Kieran
Anonymous said…
And I read Tagore's শোনার তরি written on a boat ride (WhatsApp comment by another alumnus on the same group)
Kieran said…
Here is a more romantic & mystical translation by the ChatGPT

The day was wrapped in quiet light,
The sky an endless crystal blue.
Across the fields the ripened grain
Glowed like memories of another life.
I waited on the riverbank,
My harvest gathered close—
All the hopes I had ever sown.

Then, upon the shimmering water,
A boat appeared—bright as a wandering star.
Its golden sides caught the wind,
Its sails whispered like wings of heaven.
I called, heart trembling,
“Come to me, traveler of distant realms—
Carry my harvest to the unknown shore!”

The boatman guided his radiant craft to mine.
I laid my sheaves before him,
Each one a promise, a prayer,
A story of the seasons of my soul.
But when I reached to keep just one small sheaf,
A token for my empty hands—
The golden boat was already drifting away.

Down the river of time it glided,
Silent, serene, inevitable.
It carried everything—
The dreams I gathered, the years I lived—
Into a horizon where earth meets sky
And all things return to light.

I stood alone on the water’s edge,
Heart emptied, soul shining,
Watching the golden boat fade
Into the eternal hush of evening.
Anonymous said…
I like the simplicity of this painting 😃 (WhatsApp comment from a dear relative)
Kieran said…
Minimalism is knowing when to say, enough
It’s not as easy as it sounds. I could’ve stopped 3 brush strokes earlier but I live and learn - Kieran
Anonymous said…
I like your little boat, Kieran (WhatsApp comment from a dear friend in Calgary)
Kieran said…
Thank you A Beryl. I was looking for a co-pilot to come sailing with me. 😊 - Kieran
Anonymous said…
Your boat is a bit too delicate for both of us Kieran but thanks for offering !!!!! (Reply to above comment on WhatsApp)
Kieran said…
Well spoken. Like a seasoned mariner. Ha Ha - Kieran
Anonymous said…
Kieran. Lovely! Do you do a lot of sailing? (WhatsApp comment on an alumnus group)
Kieran said…
Not really. But back in Engineering College we had a river that flowed along one side so it had a boat club attached to it. We’d go boating mostly a flat bottom punt that would never capsize. The sculls, pairs, quads and eights needed more skill. - Kieran
Kieran said…
Have you been out sailing? I haven’t but my cousin used to come from Goa every year to sail in the Nationals on Khadakwasla Lake when we were growing up in Pune (WhatsApp comment by me to a childhood friend in Sydney who liked the painting)
Kieran said…
I have a few times. Sydney Harbour is absolutely stunning when you are out sailing on it.
But I get a tad sea sick making it not the greatest experience.
Anonymous said…
Sailing was my other pastime during my navy days in Mumbai inner harbor. Then in Goa we had a boat on Zuari river. Unpredictable all the way. (WhatsApp comment from a dear friend in Florida recalling his Indian Navy days)
Kieran said…
🙏🏼 My imagery comes from my imagination, never having the chance to be on a sailboat ⛵️ - Kieran
Anonymous said…
Wonderful that you know how to sail

At one of our retreats at the WB we went on the Chesapeake to sail a boat
Each of us was given a task and together we had to sail the boat
It was a lot of work and we had to work together 😊

Do you have your own boat?
(Signal comment from a dear friend who is also very thoughtful)
Kieran said…
Ulka,
No I don’t own a boat (I was never into expensive accouterments) and the closest I have ever gotten to sailing is watching the National sailing contests at Khadakwasla Lake. At COEP, we only had row boats. All my imagery is from my imagination - Kieran

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