Quiet flows the river

 Quiet flows the river

 


Original artwork and pensive poem by Kieran Gonsalves (c) 2026, inspired by the many refreshing mountain streams one comes across when hiking the mountains


When I see a quiet flowing river, I let the tranquility soak into my bones.
The water acts like a patient sculptor smoothing the rough edges of stones.

Breathing life, allowing green moss to flourish along the sun-soaked edges
Tiny fish feast on algae and weed, making a food chain in the murky dredges

Soon snails, dragonflies and tadpoles appear to complete the ecosystem.
Be still and look carefully did you spot the warbler dive or did you miss him?

Shallow river pools are nature's veritable hot spots teeming with activity!
Small pleasures that one gets to enjoy gratis when hiking with perceptivity

Comments

Anonymous said…
Love the prose and concur with it too Kieran 👍🏼 (WhatsApp comment from an XLRI classmate on a group chat)
Kieran said…
Thanks @⁨~Arjun Trivedi (Arjuna)⁩ chalk it down to the many hiking trails in the Bay Area. Can’t wait to get back on the trails - Kieran
Anonymous said…
I loved the description of the algae, tadpoles and nature's ecosystem in all its beauty... We spent our childhood and school years in Mount Abu where we had a farm and my brother and I would go exploring along the mountain streams, catching tadpoles on our palms, hunting for rock crabs under the gushing mountain streams. It was nature in all its beauty - (Reply on WhatsApp to the above comment)
Kieran said…
I can totally relate to that. We three brothers spent our summer holidays gamboling across the hills outside Saligao, Goa behind our ancestral home with catapults and our golden cocker spaniel chasing squirrels. We’d bring home tadpoles, guppies, caterpillars, butterflies… which our parents tolerated. Precious childhood memories - Kieran
Anonymous said…
Beautiful!!! The painting and the poem... (WhatsApp comment from an artistic dear friend from Punewho loves the outdoors)
Kieran said…
You are totally into nature and I’m not surprised it resonated with you - Kieran
Anonymous said…
Thank you Kieran. So true and so real. The perceptivity bit. Absolutely (WhatsApp comment from a very dear friend in the Bay Area)
Kieran said…
Glad you liked it, Florence. I need to get out more in nature … hopefully in spring - Kieran
Anonymous said…
Love the dragonfly and the fellow poised to dive into the ripples (WhatsApp comment from a dear relative in Bombay)
Kieran said…
You are very perceptive, Pearl. Glad you liked the painting - Kieran
Anonymous said…
Fabulous (WhatsApp comment from a very dear childhood friend)
Kieran said…
Thanks Germaine, waiting to hit the trails come spring - Kieran
Anonymous said…
Very inspirational ! When I first saw it , I thought of still waters run deep . After reading your take I was transferred to another place (WhatsApp comment from a very dear cousin in Toronto, Canada)
Kieran said…
True, each one has their own interpretation of art. I’m glad my poem fired up your imagination - Kieran
Anonymous said…
Wow...love the poem. (WhatsApp comment from a dear childhood school friend)
Kieran said…
Thanks Hillary! Remember the walks to Empress garden with Orlando and Peter. We would catch guppies, tadpoles, butterflies etc. What fun!!

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