Fractured Relations

 


Fractured Relations

Original artwork and poem by Kieran Gonsalves (c) 2025


Life has its ways of pulling lovers apart
But it can ne’er quench the desires of the heart 
A loved one sacrificing it all for the front line
Bereft lover gazes out the window for a sign
Alzheimer's steals the memory of a beloved spouse
Even together, it’s like no one’s in the house
A misunderstanding can lead to a thaw in relations
Each waiting foolishly for the other to rise to the occasion
Grim reaper snatches your soulmate without warning
Left too much unsaid now it’s too late; truly heartburning
Far too busy reaching personal ambitions and goals
No time for simple companionship and tender emotions
Live in the moment, celebrate with friends and family
Carpe diem, and you’ll live ever happily

Comments

Anonymous said…
@⁨Kieran Gonsalves⁩ - your watercolors and poems are a daily spot of colorful joy! Thanks for sending them our way. (A comment from an alumni WhatsApp group)
Kieran said…
Thanks @⁨KP Naidu⁩, each day is a new adventure. Totally spontaneous. Today I came across a sculpture of a couple embracing with intentional gaps and notches. Got me thinking about imperfect relationships.
I decided to paint with bold colors to obscure the couple - you kinda see them but not entirely
I christened the painting fractured memories
The poem, if it plays out, always comes at the end. In this case it did
Glad you liked it πŸ₯° - Kieran Gonsalves
Anonymous said…
Harsh reality for one’s soul to accept and try to move forward. πŸ™ (A very dear friend who suffered the loss of a son recently on WhatsApp)
Kieran said…
I really feel for you. Being a man of deep faith, this is just the journey, there is the promise of Heaven where Our Redeemer has prepared a mansion for us (John 14:2-3) - Kieran Gonsalves
Anonymous said…
Nice, Kieran!!!! (comment on WhatsApp from a friend who recently lost her husband)
Kieran said…
Thank you Florence. You’ve been there, done that. Stay strong - Kieran
Anonymous said…
Grim Reaper is such an important metaphor for Death! (WhatsApp comment from a dear friend in Poona)
Kieran said…
Death is inevitable and we never know the date or hour of our calling. Yet we live like we and everyone we love are indestructible
Aye, the Grim Reaper strikes when least expected - Kieran
Anonymous said…
True! We live as if Immortality is ordained for us! (Reply to above comment on WhatsApp)
Kieran said…
They say you live twice, the second life starts when you realize you only have one life - Kieran
Anonymous said…
Very creative! (WhatsApp comment from my cousin)
Kieran said…
The inspiration came from a photo of a sculpture with intentional notches and gaps that got me thinking of imperfect relationships. - Kieran
Anonymous said…
BEAUTIFUL loved every line penned . This is amazing Kieran 😊🫑 (WhatsApp comment from a dear friend)
Kieran said…
Thanks Melville. There are so many ways relationships can get frayed so it seems pertinent to remind ourselves to live in the moment. Glad you liked it - Kieran
Anonymous said…
Today's art work is moving? Is it personal? Feels like it? (WhatsApp comment from my classmate who appreciates all my artwork)
Kieran said…
Hmm. All my poems are spontaneous from the heart. That’s just my style
I’ve always had open communications even with my parents, grandparents, uncles/aunts, cousins and friends. As a result I leave nothing in the proverbial tank. Unfortunately many of my nearest and dearest, have waited too long. Some lost their soul mates unexpectedly. A dear neighbor lost her 40 year old son a few months ago. A few dear friends died a slow painful death but in all cases I made my peace with them. Having said that a childhood friend who drifted away from us all, focusing on making $$ died far too quickly two years ago. That was a gut punch and we rallied to meet in person ASAP, which we did last week in Vegas after 35 years. Feeling 10 years younger - Kieran
Anonymous said…
Thanks so much. I forward your paintings to several people depending on who I feel will resonate with. My daughter's in laws are devout Catholics and so I send them all your Saint painting. Treesa loves it and sends it to her sisters (WhatsApp reply to above comment)
Kieran said…
Aww. Thank you, Vasanthi - Kieran
Anonymous said…
πŸ‘ŒπŸ», Yes carpe diem it is ! (WhatsApp comment from a dear cousin in Goa)
Kieran said…
Many people get caught up in seemingly mundane hangups that steals precious time. Let go and let God - Kieran
Anonymous said…
So true, but we often forget to enjoy the moment and the people we love (WhatsApp comment from a dear cousin in Goa)
Kieran said…
Too many opportunities lost waiting for what I don’t know. 🀷‍♂️ - Kieran
Anonymous said…
Ohhhh! I love this! (WhatsApp comment from an artistic friend in Montreal)
Kieran said…
Last weekend 4 childhood friends and I from Poona/Pune dropped everything and met for a long weekend in Vegas. Carpe Diem time. Feeling 10 years younger. ❤️ - Kieran
Anonymous said…
Beautiful, poignant words, Kieran. Coming on the heels of our heartwarming reunion made me even more glad that we seized the moment; this time will pass all too soon. Stay well, my friends, smile often, laugh if you feel like it, and shed a tear for those we loved - God bless! (WhatsApp comment from a childhood friend who was part of a friends reunion with me after 40 years)
Kieran said…
So glad to we took the time from our schedules to catch up in Vegas. memories to last a lifetime. Stay blessed y'all - Kieran

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